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Chloey
Member

since 2002-09-29

Posts 74
in a silver mustang convertible

0 posted 2003-03-04 10:45 PM

I have a good friend
Named Amanda
When you think about her name
It rhymes w/ Panda
She is a great friend
Though she's made me cry
She gave me a scare
She could've died
She is gettin some help
Im so so glad
Now I have no more tears
Now Im not so sad
I made one mistake
I brang her tears
Some stupid girls
They brought on fears
They made her think
She wasnt pretty
I think that is wrong
That's a real pity
I think she's great
She is a good friend
I'll luv her forever ever
Till the very end

I write what I feel and I feel what I write.

*~*Chloey*~*

[This message has been edited by Chloey (03-04-2003 11:20 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2003-03-05 02:35 PM

(big hugggsssssss) And it is special people like you who will always make Amanda feel special deep inside, for the best friendship comes from the heart and your heart shines with love and compassion here! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chloey, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

PoeTik JusTice
Member

since 2003-01-05

Posts 186
California, USA

2 posted 2003-03-05 02:58 PM

This poem is so sweet and cute! I love it, I'm glad to hear you cherish your friend.

Nice work.

XoXo Love Alwayz XoXo
*~Serena~*
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn, is to love, and be loved in return." --Moulin Rouge

NSnaomian
Member

since 2002-07-22

Posts 232
In my troll closet I be

3 posted 2003-03-05 09:06 PM

Very adorable...I'm glad she is doing alright. I know she will appreciate you always standing by her side. You'll have the best. Great write!
Laura

"All that I desire to point out is the general principle that Life imitates Art far more than Art imitates Life."
-Oscar Wilde

frolicking dolphin
Member

since 2003-02-23

Posts 268
my own special world

4 posted 2003-03-06 02:54 PM

Nice poem, it's always good to have a friend that you can cherish, I know because for awhile I had friends but I did not cherish them like the friends I have now.

~*~Karen~*~

~Dream like you'll live forever,live like you'll die tomorrow~

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

5 posted 2003-03-08 03:27 PM

I had a friend that was mine for over 50 years Chloey, and that took work on both our parts to hold it together, but it was worth it. She died last year and I will always miss her. Hope you have a friend like mine was.

R.E.S.P.E.C.T.
Aretha Franklin