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wvplayernotreally
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since 2002-11-06
Posts 215
yakima wa

0 posted 2003-03-11 11:05 PM



One more years fades away
I look back but can't help but weep
I mean, when i get down to it i sob
I was so stupid, the crap i pulled

I pray and ask why in the heck did this happen
Why is my life hell?
Those nights i wanted to die
The nights when i cried to sleep

The missed chances
the unsaid goodbyes
the longing to touch him one more time
all of that is gone

I SOB FOR THE LOST MEMORIES

But, there are a few good ones
the ones when i laughed so hard i almost peed my pants
good times, good times
the inside jokes, oh god don't let me forget

I love the times i can just talk and laugh
you all love and accept me, i am not lost with you
but then, i think of lost friends
and thank god for new ones

one year with memories
memories i cry for, long for
memories that leave me weeping from laughing
but memories and a year i would never change, ever

" I think I got a tan from the light in which i was basking."

© Copyright 2003 Malloree - All Rights Reserved
Darkness
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since 2002-10-17
Posts 202
The place just beyond my eyes, where my spirit flies.
1 posted 2003-03-12 12:05 PM


This is all rubbish! Friends mean nothing! now MONEY that's a different story.

Just kidding with ya! Friends are the most improtant thing on this world. No matter the good times you have with them or the times you want to kill them.

This poem is like a song I listen to: "Juggalo Homies" by ICP. If you ever get a chance, listen to it, it will put a smile on your face.

Good Poem by the way! Absolutly loved it!
Darkness

CwboyAtHeart
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since 2001-04-14
Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA
2 posted 2003-03-12 11:47 PM


I like this, Malloree.  Every year it's the same way, you gotta take both the good and the bad.  Thanks for posting this, I enjoyed it.

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?  

Albino_Jenn
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since 2003-03-03
Posts 105
Ontario, Canada
3 posted 2003-03-14 05:58 PM


This was a good poem, not really my style, but it really expressed your feelings well.
Jenn

**Hope is what Shields us from the harsh realities of life**

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