Teen Poetry #6 |
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one more year |
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wvplayernotreally Member
since 2002-11-06
Posts 215yakima wa ![]() |
One more years fades away I look back but can't help but weep I mean, when i get down to it i sob I was so stupid, the crap i pulled I pray and ask why in the heck did this happen Why is my life hell? Those nights i wanted to die The nights when i cried to sleep The missed chances the unsaid goodbyes the longing to touch him one more time all of that is gone I SOB FOR THE LOST MEMORIES But, there are a few good ones the ones when i laughed so hard i almost peed my pants good times, good times the inside jokes, oh god don't let me forget I love the times i can just talk and laugh you all love and accept me, i am not lost with you but then, i think of lost friends and thank god for new ones one year with memories memories i cry for, long for memories that leave me weeping from laughing but memories and a year i would never change, ever " I think I got a tan from the light in which i was basking." |
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Darkness Member
since 2002-10-17
Posts 202The place just beyond my eyes, where my spirit flies. |
This is all rubbish! Friends mean nothing! now MONEY that's a different story. Just kidding with ya! Friends are the most improtant thing on this world. No matter the good times you have with them or the times you want to kill them. This poem is like a song I listen to: "Juggalo Homies" by ICP. If you ever get a chance, listen to it, it will put a smile on your face. Good Poem by the way! Absolutly loved it! Darkness |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
I like this, Malloree. Every year it's the same way, you gotta take both the good and the bad. Thanks for posting this, I enjoyed it. - Cody - |
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Albino_Jenn Member
since 2003-03-03
Posts 105Ontario, Canada |
This was a good poem, not really my style, but it really expressed your feelings well. Jenn **Hope is what Shields us from the harsh realities of life** |
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