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all i think about some days
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all i think about some days |
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LiLFiGnEwToN New Member
since 2003-03-09
Posts 2where it rains all day long |
im drowning in my tears living out my night mares thinking of you trying to pull through trying to forget about the pain pretending my tears are rain flooding my heart waiting for the water to part wishing you cared realizing its not fair i wish you could see what you do to me how you make me cry you make me want to die sometimes wishing i was free from this prison this prison of pain wishing it would rain rain tears of joy you act like such a little boy leading me on, making me wait is it fate? or is it for real i know its the way i feel the was i feel about you wishing it wasnt true THE CLOSER YOU GET, THE HARDER I FALL that shouldn't be true, because you're not close at all you dont even care about me you dont care about my misery you dont care about my pain and i know im the one to blame and if you ever were to erad this i hope that you wouldnt miss a single word or phrase and realize that even though im angry you're all i think about some days |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
Welcome to Passions In Poetry! wow. your debut was quite a touching plea en vers. I look forward to reading more from you. make sure to check your e-mail for a special surprise. -majnu |
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Albino_Jenn Member
since 2003-03-03
Posts 105Ontario, Canada |
Very touching, I have been there, Hope is what gets us through the day, it's the only thing that can shelter us from the harsh realities of life, Good Job keep up the good work! Jenn |
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