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Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

0 posted 2003-03-07 06:22 PM

I wrote this while listening to "The Anthem" by Good Charlotte and reading some posts! "Don't wanna be you"-Good Charlotte

listen to the uni
all in their simple glory
and i
the non
all in a rut as the song plays
no attention directed
the locker slams
its another loser
being shut in
like someone else i knew
a conformist walks by me
in the same old path
i want to scream
to them i direct a question
"Do you wanna be like me?"
they don't answer
except for a nod
so slight i hardly notice
i sigh and reply
"I never wanna be like you"*

*_Good Charlotte-The ANTHEM ( It's another loser anthem )

Morning mist clings to my face, and my soul opens up to you......

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

1 posted 2003-03-08 05:30 PM

good message and well written

jenn(another loser)

think about this: everyone you know will someday die.

EleanorMoonbaby
Member

since 2002-09-02

Posts 202
England, UK

2 posted 2003-03-09 05:36 PM

Well done. Us losers need to stand up against the majority! Would you care to join the ISPL (International Society Of Pathetic Losers)? I'm a fully registered member! And Good Charlotte do indeed kick ass. Good poem.
Ellie

I'm not dead, OK? I'm just a little electroencephalographically challenged!

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

3 posted 2003-03-09 05:50 PM

Thanks Jenn and Ellie. Ellie, I would be honored to be a part of your club. I would fit right in. LOSERS ROCK and so does good charlotte

Morning mist clings to my face, and my soul opens up to you......

skyshine

Member Elite

since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

4 posted 2003-03-10 11:57 AM

Can I join the club too? Riley, you ought to have submitted this for the book!

Elizabeth

It's not having what you want, it's wanting what you've got...
--Sheryl Crow

PoeTik JusTice
Member

since 2003-01-05

Posts 186
California, USA

5 posted 2003-03-10 01:24 PM

great work!! I really liked it, and yes, good charlotte does rock!

XoXo Love Alwayz XoXo
*~Serena~*
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn, is to love, and be loved in return." --Moulin Rouge

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