Why?( death of a great friend)

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Why?( death of a great friend)

scubagurl02
New Member

since 2003-03-03

Posts 4

0 posted 2003-03-05 02:06 AM

Why you?
Why not me?
Why now?
Why that day?
Why not later?
Like when your
old and gray?
Why now?
Why that way?
I wish I knew Why?
On the other hand I
Know your in the sky.
Looking down on everyone
That passes by.
On everyone you love
and could of.
We all look back
and know that you are safe.
But still wish we could see
your smiling face.
All I ask is
Why you?
Why not me?
Why now?
Why that way?
And finaly
Why that Day?

PoeTik JusTice
Member

since 2003-01-05

Posts 186
California, USA

1 posted 2003-03-05 03:01 PM

I can really relate to this poem. Im sorry to hear about this, its horrible! Ive lost two friends within the last few months...all we can do as be happy they are in a good place now. Keep your head up.

XoXo Love Alwayz XoXo
*~Serena~*
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn, is to love, and be loved in return." --Moulin Rouge

NSnaomian
Member

since 2002-07-22

Posts 232
In my troll closet I be

2 posted 2003-03-05 09:03 PM

What I can say about this isn't so great. It had too many questions for me to get anything out of it...that would be my opinion though. You already have one of another and she liked it, so I guess thats for you to decide. I can tell you that I hope you are doing alright and to hold strong.
Laura

"All that I desire to point out is the general principle that Life imitates Art far more than Art imitates Life."
-Oscar Wilde

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

3 posted 2003-03-10 01:38 AM

scubagurl02~
I'm so sorry for the loss of your friend.
You've conveyed the emotional confusion very well
in this piece and I could feel the struggle to understand.
Nice job on this.
You and your friend's family will be in my thoughts and prayers.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

skyshine

Member Elite

since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

4 posted 2003-03-10 11:59 AM

I'm sorry to hear about your friend.

Sometimes these questions can never be answered. Take care and nice to meet you.

Elizabeth

It's not having what you want, it's wanting what you've got...
--Sheryl Crow

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