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frolicking dolphin
Member

since 2003-02-23

Posts 268
my own special world

0 posted 2003-03-06 09:21 PM

Have you forgotten
What we used to share
The good times we had together
How much we used to care?

You have reserved a place
deep within my heart
Where I'll never forget you
It was there from the start.

I got to know you very well
With the two years we had together
Then we began to break apart
I was blown like a feather.

You went on to be
The most popular guy in school
I began to lose you
I must just be too shy.

Finally our paths cross again
I really don't expect that much
I mean what do you need me for
I'm like an old speck of dust.

I've lived my life without you
Hoping we would meet again
Finally we are reunited
But I'm still just blowing in the wind.

Do you remember
The times we used to share
The times we spent together
The times when we were there to care?

~*~Karen~*~

~Dream like you'll live forever,live like you'll die tomorrow~

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

1 posted 2003-03-06 09:25 PM

Wonderful poem, I don't think I've read any of your poems before. That means a welcome is in order. so...
Welcome to pip!!! Judging from this poem, it's great to have you here.
I can relate to it well, I really like the line, "But Im still just blowing in the wind."
Wonderful, Excellent!

WinterWren
"Even a fool knows that we cannot touch the stars, but that doesn't keep the wise from trying."

frolicking dolphin
Member

since 2003-02-23

Posts 268
my own special world

2 posted 2003-03-06 09:31 PM

Thank you for your welcome, that was my sixth poem posted so there haven't been many opportunities to read my poems. I enjoy reading your poems they all seem so touching.

Thanks for your reply

~*~Karen~*~

~Dream like you'll live forever,live like you'll die tomorrow~

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

3 posted 2003-03-08 05:42 PM

this is soo good. i feel the same way about someone, he was my first love and now he's gone on to bigger and better things...leaving me in the dust wondering where I went wrong...sigh...good write anyway.

Jenn

think about this: everyone you know will someday die.

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