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HardHitter
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since 2003-03-25
Posts 23


0 posted 2003-07-08 03:58 AM


When this began, I had nothing to say,
and I was lost from the things hiding inside of me.
I was confused, from the pain that still bled,
trying to move on, but not ready for what was up ahead.
Meeting an angel that was lost on earth,
but to her, what was I? what was I worth?
Feelings building up, yet this didn't feel right,
I thought about it, was it really for this girl I write?
I was confused, I'd toss, I'd turn,
who were these feelings for, who did I really urn?
Hearing the sweet voice and that charming laugh,
brought memories rushing back to my behalf.
A thing I can't have, I try to forget,
is this really what I want to do? Or is it something I'll regret.
Being with one girl, yet another still in the back of my mind,
this girl doesn't know anything about me, she's going in blind.
True love is all I can think of this,
yet so young, but still cannot forget their first kiss.
Although not with her, I think of the times and reminisce,
her love, her smile, is what I truly miss.

© Copyright 2003 Brian James Watson - All Rights Reserved
dertah
Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584

1 posted 2003-07-08 12:10 PM


i feel like these words are my very own, i can relate in every way.  and it seems im too late to give any advice, but i think we both know what we should have done.
BrokenDreams
Member
since 2003-02-09
Posts 425
In The Clouds
2 posted 2003-07-08 12:51 PM


I used to feel the same way. Thankfully I got all my feelings straightened out, and I hope you do too.

-Jen

I'd rather be hated for who I am than loved for who I am not. -Kurt Cobain

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