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Lexy
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since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038
California

0 posted 2003-07-08 12:10 PM


I don't know anything..
speechless at the thought of.
You, ring in my ears..
This incessant song of what should be.
Leave me..please.
Sitting still in this chair...
It would be much easier to cope...knowing I couldn't have you 'cause you weren't real.
But your here, in my soul..haunting me.
Taunting me with your voice..
And I wish,
And I dream..
Of what it is you think.
of me..
But its not close enough to feel,
its not strong enough to taste..
just a vague emotion, hanging in this middle air..
begging for something more.
Some sort of state.
Alive or something like it..

[This message has been edited by Lexy (07-08-2003 12:14 AM).]

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dertah
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since 2003-06-18
Posts 584

1 posted 2003-07-08 01:05 AM


very nice work.  i enjoyed every word of it.  and i loved the style.
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