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Teen Poetry #6

Problems in Life

Albino_Jenn
Member

since 2003-03-03

Posts 105
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2003-03-03 11:08 PM

The world is changing
Everything becomes clear
It's time to deal with life
And face your greatest fears
The underlying problems
Cause tears of pain
Your life is getting harder
You're all alone again
The hands fo God
Are all you have to hold
You rely on his strength
As your problems unfold
You don't know what to do
Or even what to say
You put on a smile
And make it all seem ok
There's feelings of guilt
Pity, and sorrow
Who knows what life will bring
We were never promised tomorrow
You try to understand why
You're in this situation
You are overcome
With a fearful sensation
There's nothing left to do
But sit alone and cry
'Cause it does no good to question
All the reasons why!

frolicking dolphin
Member

since 2003-02-23

Posts 268
my own special world

1 posted 2003-03-04 03:58 PM

Nicely written, I really enjoyed it. I can't wait to read more from you

~*~Karen~*~

~Dream like you'll live forever,live like you'll die tomorrow~

Chloey
Member

since 2002-09-29

Posts 74
in a silver mustang convertible

2 posted 2003-03-04 06:16 PM

You are a very good poet! Cant wait to read more! Keep'em Coming!

I write what I feel and I feel what I write.

*~*Chloey*~*

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