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Trouble Breathing Member
since 2002-11-12
Posts 63 |
I think I may have posted this once already, but I couldnt find it..so..Ill give it another go. Looking into the eyes of the innocent, Looking into the uncertainty of my future As I look up into the sky, A giant galaxy of the unknown, A darkness, which cannot be explained There are limitless possibilities, But limited imaginations Endless stars, farther than the eye can see. Much beyond what we don’t know Much beyond what we care to believe Out there may be a bigger and better place, Waiting to be discovered, Waiting to be explored, There’s got to be more to this than I can see, Limitless seas of knowledge Beautiful in it’s own right From the stars we can already see, To the empty spaces, Where I wish to be, Someday we will know, What is truly out there What it all truly means But until then Ill continue to dream I’ll continue to wish For all that I may never see [This message has been edited by Trouble Breathing (02-26-2003 02:03 AM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) And among all those stars and plasma and light, all our destinies truly are being held by the grace of God, and someday we will be able to decipher the unknowable and just happy to appreciate the beauty of the unknowing out there! (big hugggsssss) I haven't read this till now and I love it, you have my celestial vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Ooo, a perfect little dream. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
They can't take away our dreams!! good job. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Wow, I love this poem, and I love to dream also.  Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent. |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
I've written lots about dreams. Great submission you have shared with us here.  Dawn |
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Triskaidekaphobia Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 251In a state of disrepair... |
I only skimmed this over quickly but I enjoyed it thouroghly. I will read it in more depth later but it really does seem good on the first read through. There should be a psychology of feet. For do we not make decisions with our legs and walk about on our brains? What do you mean "No, not really"? |
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frolicking dolphin Member
since 2003-02-23
Posts 268my own special world |
Nice poem it has my vote ~*~Karen~*~ |
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Chloey Member
since 2002-09-29
Posts 74in a silver mustang convertible |
Really nice write! You are one of my favorite's to read! You definitely have my vote!  I write what I feel and I feel what I write. *~*Chloey*~* [This message has been edited by Chloey (03-04-2003 06:19 PM).] |
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