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Albino_Jenn
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since 2003-03-03
Posts 105
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2003-03-03 11:25 PM



An Ode to you

I look at you and what do I see??
A guy who came into my life and undertands me
Others may not see what it is that's so great
There's nothing about you I can possibly hate
You make life seem easy, like it's not that bad
The hope that you gave me, was all that I had
You made me see what life was all about
Not living to please yourself,but to help others out
You are caring, and giving, and total sweetheart
You came into my life, and gave me a new start
You're a great person to know inside and out
You helped me conquer my fears and surrender my doubt
You're my dearest friend, and I trully love you
You are the most amazing person I ever knew

© Copyright 2003 Jenn - All Rights Reserved
frolicking dolphin
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since 2003-02-23
Posts 268
my own special world
1 posted 2003-03-04 04:00 PM


That describes me and a good friend of mine too,  another nice poem, keep up the good work!

~*~Karen~*~

~Dream like you'll live forever,live like you'll die tomorrow~

Chloey
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since 2002-09-29
Posts 74
in a silver mustang convertible
2 posted 2003-03-04 06:15 PM


Really Nice Poem! Keep writing hope to read more soon!

I write what I feel and I feel what I write.

         *~*Chloey*~*

[This message has been edited by Chloey (03-04-2003 06:16 PM).]

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