I don't want to watch you die

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frolicking dolphin
Member

since 2003-02-23

Posts 268
my own special world

0 posted 2003-03-03 06:16 PM

You came into school today,
You were bleeding and in pain
I joked and said "don't slit your wrists"
But all you did was look up in vain.

You said you were trying "different things"
Then showed me scratches on your wrist
I said "Kristen you can't die now,
Don't resort to this"

I saw the pain you caused yourself
I could sense fear in your eyes
I couldn't believe you would leave me now
After years of laughs and cries.

We played basketball before school those days
You seemed so happy then
Then we moved to Middle School
You had trouble fitting in.

You had exhausted all of your options
High school, family, friends
You even went through counselling
But still you had a deadly mind When it came to everyday things

I feel I could have been a slightly better friend
But with all our years together
I never dreamed you would cave in.

I have been there for you
What happens when I am in need of a friend?
Are you really going to leave me
Before the very end?

Kristen, if you're reading this
I know you know who you are
You're my dearest friend
I don't want to watch you die.

~*~Karen~*~

~Dream like you'll live forever,live like you'll die tomorrow~

[This message has been edited by frolicking dolphin (03-04-2003 03:43 PM).]

rimmie
Junior Member

since 2002-08-09

Posts 45
Winnipeg, Manitoba, Canada

1 posted 2003-03-03 09:36 PM

I thought this was amazing! Very powerfull and very well writen...although I did notice several spelling/grammar mistakes.
Keep up the good job!
~RuZ~

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

2 posted 2003-03-03 09:44 PM

Oh My Gosh. That *really* touched me. My best friend and I are going thru the same thing with each other. And it goes both ways, so I know what you're going thru and if you want to talk, I'm here to listen.

Jenn

Triskaidekaphobia
Member

since 2003-02-05

Posts 251
In a state of disrepair...

3 posted 2003-03-03 11:49 PM

As has been said already a very touching write. Unless you feel like it yourself its almost impossible to know what say (and difficult even if you do know what it feels like).

Very well written, honest too.

There should be a psychology of feet. For do we not make decisions with our legs and walk about on our brains? What do you mean "No, not really"?

Albino_Jenn
Member

since 2003-03-03

Posts 105
Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2003-03-04 04:39 PM

nicely put...you really feel like crying...I enjoyed it greatly!!!!
Jenn

Fariegirl
Member

since 2003-02-05

Posts 147

5 posted 2003-03-04 05:07 PM

*sniffle* that was GREAT.

Chloey
Member

since 2002-09-29

Posts 74
in a silver mustang convertible

6 posted 2003-03-04 06:13 PM

Amazing! Really Great read and write!

I write what I feel and I feel what I write.

*~*Chloey*~*

frolicking dolphin
Member

since 2003-02-23

Posts 268
my own special world

7 posted 2003-03-06 09:32 PM

Thank you all, I'm glad you were touched by my poem.

~*~Karen~*~

~Dream like you'll live forever,live like you'll die tomorrow~

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