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Blurryness |
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cjbuckys New Member
since 2003-02-27
Posts 8 |
This is the final straw, This is the curtain call, This is the end of it all, My life seems so little and used, I want to disappear in a foggy midst, I want to shatter into a thousand pieces, My mental state is frozen, Put me in the white jacket, Put me in a padded room, One voice heard, everything is blurry, Nothing makes sense, Everything is vanishing before my eyes, I have no control any longer, I’m sick of your questions, I’m sick of your lies, I’m sick of your teachings, I’m sick of your helping, Putting me down, Lifting me up, This is my final straw, This is my curtain call, This is my end to it all.. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
hi PoetFriend... Your poem tugs at the heartstrings of this reader... Thanx4sharing... Smiles2u *~coco~* |
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EleanorMoonbaby Member
since 2002-09-02
Posts 202England, UK |
This one too. I can identify. Well done. Ellie  I'm not dead, OK? I'm just a little electroencephalographically challenged! |
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