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Teen Poetry #6

A Broken Friendship

PurplePeopleEater
Junior Member

since 2002-01-04

Posts 11

0 posted 2003-02-24 11:48 PM

this ones about this person who used to be my best friend til she ditched me :/

Betrayed like it was nothing
But to me it was something more
A convienance was all I was
Never good enough anymore
Left me here with no one around
Better friends are there for you now
Sorry I wasn't "cool" enough
I'll go back to my loser self
Go back to feed your ego once more
Gone with people you claimed to hate

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2003-02-25 01:42 AM

I felt this poem. It happens, don't relish upon this. It's a speedbump, and you should press on. You can do it.
Good poem.

Look at the sun and burn your eyes. You'll be fine in the end.

frolicking dolphin
Member

since 2003-02-23

Posts 268
my own special world

2 posted 2003-02-25 02:52 PM

Same thing happened to me in 7th grade, I moved on sat with people I barely knew, and now my bestfriend who I met by moving on is almost a sister to me. If she/he was mean enough to use your friendship it's probably better that you're no longer friends.
Good luck
Karen

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

3 posted 2003-02-25 11:25 PM

The title really got my attention, oh but I have been there before.

I have also written many poems about it, it helps somehow. Good poem, hope you feel better soon.

WinterWren
"Even a fool knows that we cannot touch the stars, but that doesn't keep the wise from trying."

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