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Teen Poetry #6

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Eminem wanna be
Member

since 2003-02-04

Posts 52
Windsor, Missouri

0 posted 2003-02-24 09:48 PM

pg. 1
They say we need to be mature
then we shouldn't grow up to fast.
Which on is it gonna be?
How long's this confusion gonna last?

They yell at us like dogs
locked up in a cage
They think things should go their way
"Turn another page"

pg. 2
to them we don't have freedom of speech
we just abide by their made up laws
to them we are just bratty kids
but others have no flaws.

Some are perfect
others screwed up real bad
I know thats how its always been
but don't it make you mad?

This is pretty bad but I jus wanted to try something diff.

~*Crystal*~

"You can do anything you set your mind to man" Em
"Here I come but I ain't the same" Ozzy

[This message has been edited by Eminem wanna be (02-24-2003 09:50 PM).]

AJMGW
Member

since 2002-11-19

Posts 57
Galaxy Roller Rink

1 posted 2003-02-25 12:02 PM

I liked it. It didn't sound like it sould have ended when it did. come back and do more to it. It just sounds like you walked away from it when you were writing. I really did ilke it though.
~AJMGW~

rimmie
Junior Member

since 2002-08-09

Posts 45
Winnipeg, Manitoba, Canada

2 posted 2003-02-26 05:13 PM

I thought that this was awsome! I really like the stile and would love to read more!

~RuZ~

Eminem wanna be
Member

since 2003-02-04

Posts 52
Windsor, Missouri

3 posted 2003-02-26 07:09 PM

I can't really think of anymore to add on to it

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