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Teen Poetry #6

Another Door Closes

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2003-02-23 11:33 AM

I know what I did
And how it hurt you
But I'm still a kid
I have a life too

I know what I've lost
I can only imagine how you feel
As my tears begin to frost
I know this is for real

I hate feeling this way
And I know you want to talk
But I have nothing left to say
As I begin to walk..

..Away..
from what I can't have anymore
and another door
..Closes today..

If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain.

Surreal
Junior Member

since 2002-10-21

Posts 35
Paris

1 posted 2003-02-23 02:11 PM

What a sad piece. But sometimes you do need to let go. I could definitely relate to this one.

frolicking dolphin
Member

since 2003-02-23

Posts 268
my own special world

2 posted 2003-02-23 04:33 PM

I'm all too familiar with having to let go, and that poem explains exactly how I've felt on those occasions.
Karen

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2003-02-24 05:29 PM

This was so awesome. Very sad, very very very sad poem here. More doors will open though......just be ready for those and learn from all the one's that closed prior.

Look at the sun and burn your eyes. You'll be fine in the end.

Eminem wanna be
Member

since 2003-02-04

Posts 52
Windsor, Missouri

4 posted 2003-02-24 05:31 PM

hey i can kinda relate...good write...keep it up

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

5 posted 2003-02-24 05:37 PM

holy sh...this seriously could have been written about me. very touching.

jenn

think about this: everyone you know will someday die.

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