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CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

0 posted 2003-02-21 11:28 PM

I posted this one before... But it didn't get any replies, so I'm going to try posting it once again. I think it is one of my better once I've ever written, and certainly the best, in my mind, that I've written recently. Your input on this one would be greatly appreciated. Thanks!

QUESTIONS

Tick tock, tick tock, tick tock
Feel the world spin
So many questions run
Right through your frozen mind
I dont know what's gone wrong
I'm not sure where to turn
Everything you once had
Is crashing to the ground
I shouldn't feel this way
Am I the one to blame?
Things never go the way
That they're supposed to go
You have always got to keep
Your eyes set on the Lord
Does He really love me?
Never have to look back
Jesus is on your side
Yes, my God is loving
When questions fill your mind
You drop down to your knees
Lord, I give you my life
Please save me from myself
My problems in your hands

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

1 posted 2003-03-06 02:09 PM

Hey, great poem! Okay, just kidding, I wrote this, but ya know. Respond, please? Oh well. Bye!

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

AJMGW
Member

since 2002-11-19

Posts 57
Galaxy Roller Rink

2 posted 2003-03-20 11:53 AM

No one has posted?

well Ilike it. It has the
dark aspecet yet you're
not hidding anything.
Good job!

^*~AJMGW~*^
Melissa

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

3 posted 2003-03-20 12:33 PM

i liked it alot Cody, you're right it is one of your better poems..

Regina

PoeTik JusTice
Member

since 2003-01-05

Posts 186
California, USA

4 posted 2003-03-20 12:50 PM

No one replied before? Don't see why not! I really liked it! Good work.

XoXo Love Alwayz XoXo
*~Serena~*
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn, is to love, and be loved in return." --Moulin Rouge

frolicking dolphin
Member

since 2003-02-23

Posts 268
my own special world

5 posted 2003-03-20 03:28 PM

It was a very good poem, I really liked, I don't think I saw it before when you had posted it.

~*~Karen~*~

~Dream like you'll live forever,live like you'll die tomorrow~

CSwtThng
Member

since 1999-07-28

Posts 124

6 posted 2003-03-20 05:29 PM

I really enjoyed your poem. I have asked myself these same questions many times.

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

7 posted 2003-03-20 06:08 PM

controversial subject matter but the poem itself is very well written.
Jenn

don't ever let others tell you who you are

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