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Starsfalling Member
since 2003-03-18
Posts 94some where deep in the shadows |
All the lies in the world, And not one as deadly as yours "I'm fine" was all you said... I should have know, Should have seen All the cuts and all the hidden tears A pact was formed, Deep within your mind... No one could love you so you should leave, You left with a bullet in your head! And i lay broken upon the floor A husk of a man, My mind shattered with the news Why couldnt i see? -lance no one can help you... especially not your friends |
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CSwtThng Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 124 |
This is a very sad poem, but I enjoyed reading it. Nice job! |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
......Losing sometone close is the hardest thing you will probaly ever experience...Something I've tried to deal with,and honestly, failed everytime. Your poem was filled with a lot of emotion. A lot of it seemed sad, some of it seemed angry....*hugs* Regina "heaven truley knows that thou art false as hell...one that loved not wisely,but too well..she swore..'twas a strange ,'twas passing strange"-othello |
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Starsfalling Member
since 2003-03-18
Posts 94some where deep in the shadows |
regina... im really sorry for ur loss or losses i hope u can get through them -lance dark minds only see dark things |
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Starsfalling Member
since 2003-03-18
Posts 94some where deep in the shadows |
cswthing... thank u very much... all of my poetry that i share shall be sad and depressing.. anything that is happy i keep in my head and only there.. THANK YA -lance |
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