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CwboyAtHeart
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since 2001-04-14
Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

0 posted 2003-02-21 10:55 PM


This is kind of a vent...  Wrote it quick, and it's a little longer then what I usually write.  I dont like it much, but maybe ya'll will feel differently or have some ideas on how I can improve it, or maybe just tell me that I should trash it.  Tell me what you think!  

DISORGANIZATIONAL SKILLS

Disorganizational skills are all I have
It starts out good
I mess it up
Never works out
The way that is should
All my fault...
I never should have started
Knew it would fall apart in the end
This way
Every day
It's always the same
Life throws curves
So I put them in a row
I try to separate
And take them all at the same time
That doesn't work
It's all up in my face
Over my head
And everybody loves to hate
Disorganizational skills
All I've got
I put my knowledge to work
And use my craftsmanship
Screw it up
Each and every time
It never fails
I'm not meant to have a life
When I give it a try...
I get shot
Fall apart
It's hard to restart
But it always seems to work out
In the end
Disorganizational skills
Is it really skill?
Or is it fate?
It's not meant to happen
From the start
And it's never gonna work out
The way I wish it was
In the end

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?  

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Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667
New York
1 posted 2003-02-23 01:10 PM


Life throws you curves.... but you LEARN to swerve...

Listen to Rascal Flatts- These days!!!


Good Poem btw!!!

(¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨)
  ·.¸(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´
     *`·.¸.·´*
    Love Always
       Kellie

Dopey Dope
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since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico
2 posted 2003-02-23 03:44 PM


We often find ourselves living in the shadows of possibilities. You can't go on with this train of thought. Do your best, and if you fail press on.  We've all failed, we've all messed up....but true failure is never trying at all.

Nice poem.
later cody

-j-

Look at the sun and burn your eyes. You'll be fine in the end.

NSnaomian
Member
since 2002-07-22
Posts 232
In my troll closet I be
3 posted 2003-02-23 04:43 PM


OMG Kellie, absolutely love that song!
I know just what you are saying in this and you did it very well...great job!
You'll pull through it.
Laura

"All that I desire to point out is the general principle that Life imitates Art far more than Art imitates Life."
-Oscar Wilde

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