Teen Poetry #6 |
Disorganizational Skills |
CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
This is kind of a vent... Wrote it quick, and it's a little longer then what I usually write. I dont like it much, but maybe ya'll will feel differently or have some ideas on how I can improve it, or maybe just tell me that I should trash it. Tell me what you think! DISORGANIZATIONAL SKILLS Disorganizational skills are all I have It starts out good I mess it up Never works out The way that is should All my fault... I never should have started Knew it would fall apart in the end This way Every day It's always the same Life throws curves So I put them in a row I try to separate And take them all at the same time That doesn't work It's all up in my face Over my head And everybody loves to hate Disorganizational skills All I've got I put my knowledge to work And use my craftsmanship Screw it up Each and every time It never fails I'm not meant to have a life When I give it a try... I get shot Fall apart It's hard to restart But it always seems to work out In the end Disorganizational skills Is it really skill? Or is it fate? It's not meant to happen From the start And it's never gonna work out The way I wish it was In the end - Cody - |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
Life throws you curves.... but you LEARN to swerve... Listen to Rascal Flatts- These days!!! Good Poem btw!!! (¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨) |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
We often find ourselves living in the shadows of possibilities. You can't go on with this train of thought. Do your best, and if you fail press on. We've all failed, we've all messed up....but true failure is never trying at all. Nice poem. later cody -j- Look at the sun and burn your eyes. You'll be fine in the end. |
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NSnaomian Member
since 2002-07-22
Posts 232In my troll closet I be |
OMG Kellie, absolutely love that song! I know just what you are saying in this and you did it very well...great job! You'll pull through it. Laura "All that I desire to point out is the general principle that Life imitates Art far more than Art imitates Life." |
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