Teen Poetry #6 |
Someone To Save Me |
StellarChica Member
since 2002-07-06
Posts 207floating down a river... |
Some days I wish everything would just stop, And the snow would melt away, And I'd be able to get you out of my head, Just long enough to feel like I'd been saved. I need to be saved, By anything, Anyone, Just as long as I didn't feel like this anymore. I'd like to wake up one morning, And smile because it was a brand new day, Because right now, It feels like the same day is repeating itself. Just once I'd like to be good enough for someone, I'd like to live without fear, Find someone who rids me of inhibition. Just someone to save me... Because I'm drowning. "It's hard to look in the mirror these days when everyone has everything you'd rather be."-Saves The Day |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Erin~ I think many of us have felt this way at various times in our lives. You've expressed it very well. Nicely penned. ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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NSnaomian Member
since 2002-07-22
Posts 232In my troll closet I be |
I agree, many of us go through this. ...and! You're not drowning! *holds you up* You're just so pretty... Laura "All that I desire to point out is the general principle that Life imitates Art far more than Art imitates Life." |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
yeah...like today, I know how you feel, about one day repeating itself, I hate the repition and monotonoy. Great piece. ~Lexy |
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