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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
Scorched lips, after a tender kiss. Everypart of me, wants this more than anything. Pulse racing, after that passionate encounter. The memory of you will forever be etched upon my heart. Only Skin deep, the truth lies. Embrace this now or always regret what you've lost. I should've listened to myself. If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
This is hot. I liked it. Never regret. Jenn "Now I'm convinced that he's heaven sent, and must be out of his mind- mama he's crazy, crazy over me." |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
thanks, i'm glad u liked it. If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Spine Grinder~ I enjoyed this. I like that you didn't get carried away with a lot of words. You kept it relatively short and still did a wonderful job of expressing yourself. Nicely done.  ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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NSnaomian Member
since 2002-07-22
Posts 232In my troll closet I be |
"The memory of you will forever be etched upon my heart." I like this part a lot! You did a great job showing this. Laura "All that I desire to point out is the general principle that Life imitates Art far more than Art imitates Life." |
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