Teen Poetry #6 |
Alone |
PrincessNets Member
since 2002-10-30
Posts 103NewYork, USA |
I haven't posted in a while and I'm not quite sure that this poem is good, but I am posting it anyway. Tell me what you think. ---------------------------- Here I sit, alone again Not really fitting in anywhere People are sometimes friendly, But I wonder if they care. They have lives of their own And it seems that there is No place for me In their rigorous schedules. I can't do anything, Not even in my free time I have no life of my own All my time is spent Doing things for other people Never for myself Yet it seems that No one truly care. No one seems to care That I spend my time alone, Watching sad movies And balling my eyes out No one has any time for me, The girl everyone "likes". So, with that Here I sit, alone again. |
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AJMGW Member
since 2002-11-19
Posts 57Galaxy Roller Rink |
I really like it. a strong feel to fit in. Good. AJMGW |
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BabieDoll Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 268BFE |
I LOVE this poem! I TOTALLY relate to this poem and it's exactly how I feel sometimes. Good job hun! ~J.Lynn "In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..." |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
PrincessNets~ Ouch...this one hurts. You've done such a good job of expressing the emotions in this piece and I felt every word as I read. Nicely done. ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
amen. I feel like this also, but who to tell, I've written one too sad poems, watched one too many sad movies, hopeing something will relieve this lonelyness. Its feel like you do everything, you try so hard, but its all in vain. I could really relate. Thanks for sharing, its nice knowing I'm not so alone in being alone. ~Lexy |
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