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Teen Poetry #6

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NeverSayDie
Junior Member

since 2001-01-18

Posts 39
Duluth, MN & Grand Forks ND

0 posted 2003-02-10 02:20 PM

As the darkness does come
my mind it does stray
I don't think of things
But listen instead
I thought I could manage
A life without love
but love I miss you
I still see you every day
A constant reminder of us
The days we where together
and most of all the love
And now I see you happy
I hope thats how you'll stay
But now I start out alone
and may that be the way
I stay until I find someone
and when my luck does change
that someone who will love me back.

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

1 posted 2003-02-10 09:17 PM

Great poem, Im sure alot of people can relate to this one and that's always a good thing.
I love this one, I especially like the line, "but love I miss you."
Well done!

WinterWren
"Even a fool knows that we cannot touch the stars, but that doesn't keep the wise from trying."

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

2 posted 2003-02-10 09:49 PM

This poem is making me think. But the good thing about being alone is that no one can break your heart cause nobody has it.

~if you want something very badly set it free, if it comes back to you its yours forever, if it doesnt it was never yours to begin with~

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