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Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

0 posted 2003-02-04 07:48 PM

I don't want you to pity me,
When you finally glance my way.
Don't say you understand,
And raise your hand, to wipe my tears away.
I don't want sympathy, not now, not ever.
Not from you, whose heart I tryed to capture.
I don't want to want you..
Not after I've come to my sences.
I don't want to throw caution to the wind,
No, not again.
Theres a false sence of sincerety in your touch,
something I've longed to feel..
But I'm plunged head first, hurting, remebering,
This can't possibly be real.
Why do you choose to see my tears now?
After they've long fallen,
why do you want me now,
after the wounds have healed over.
I don't want your pity.
I don't want to believe..
How could you want me?

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

1 posted 2003-02-04 07:50 PM

Ohhh, I understand this one honey. *hugs tight* Beautifully written, I just wish that you didn't have to experience this.

Monkey!!

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

2 posted 2003-02-09 02:12 AM

Lexy~
I felt this...every bit of it.
You've expressed the emotions very well.
Nicely done.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

3 posted 2003-02-10 02:01 PM

Wow..very well written you did a great job getting your emotions out there. I liked it a lot...:

: tough situation

Standing on the edge of the world
Now I don’t want you to catch me
I want you to let me
Stand up here and walk on my own

Victoria7
Junior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 21

4 posted 2003-02-10 07:25 PM

*hugs* i now the exact feeling you expressed in your poem

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

5 posted 2003-02-10 09:15 PM

Another great poem! You did a wonderful job on this, Im sure alot of people can relate to it, including me!
Well done!

WinterWren
"Even a fool knows that we cannot touch the stars, but that doesn't keep the wise from trying."

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