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dinky
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since 2002-10-19
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0 posted 2003-02-08 09:18 PM


Twenty dollars is all I have left,
For the road trip on my own,
The road trip goin far away from home
Money slowly being wasted,
The bitterness of bein deserted I have already tasted
I’ll never have another friend,
Because I am slowly nearin the end
No one really cares,
Think about the friends that weren’t even really there
The riddle of how they all fooled me
Repeating itself in my head constantly
Forget about it now,
As I step over the edge.

"sometimes i just feel like
quittin i still might
why do i put up this fight?
why do i still write?"

© Copyright 2003 samantha rae - All Rights Reserved
foreverwithyou
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since 2002-10-20
Posts 204
Wonderland
1 posted 2003-02-08 10:15 PM


ITS NOT THE ANSWER SAM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! What is your problem? Do u need to talk? Feeling alone in this big world? Your friends...the best ever yet they are hard to understand at times.....We Know u love us sam...as do we love u! HUGS AND KISSES! A $500 lap dance from Allison.
                  *Cathy*

"I am who I am who I am who am I?"

dinky
Member
since 2002-10-19
Posts 258

2 posted 2003-02-09 07:33 PM


hey,
i'm fine.
and no thx to the lap dance. tell allison not to cry LoL
thx for replyin
~samantha~

"sometimes i just feel like
quittin i still might
why do i put up this fight?
why do i still write?"

devinechild22
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since 2002-08-28
Posts 571

3 posted 2003-02-09 09:13 PM


It`s too late for that now Sam..
         *Cosmopolitian*

"I`ll be your crying shoulder
I`ll be your suicide
I`ll be better when I`m older
I`ll be the greatest fan of your life"
-"I`ll be"

foreverwithyou
Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 204
Wonderland
4 posted 2003-02-10 10:19 PM


LOL cosmopolitan!!! im a shirly temple!!did i tell u guys!!!angela is a gin and tonic!!!we should call her that LOL c ya all at school!!nice poem sam!!(even tho i already replied but allison typed that)
              *CATHY*

"I am who I am who I am who am I?"

devinechild22
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since 2002-08-28
Posts 571

5 posted 2003-02-12 07:18 PM


What can i say? I love Subway!

GO GO GO GO GO GO Go
Shorty It`s your birthday!
We gon party like it your birthday
We gon sip Bicardi like its your birthday...!
-50 Cent

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