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WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

0 posted 2003-01-11 09:37 PM

Wow! This one's not depressing! Aren't you proud of me?

Searching for me still
I've taken the road to tomorrow
And that is where you'll find me.
I'd grown tired of being stuck in yesterday
So I decided to let the past stay where it was
On some things I needed to lose my hold
So I've taken the road to tomorrow.

Don't cry because Im gone
If you want to, follow.
Who knows what we could find in tomorrow?
The memories of long ago were blurring
Perhaps they'll be in focus
When I look back on them from tomorrow.

The rains of the past were cold
Maybe tomorrow's rainbow will be bright.
I've taken the road to tomorrow.
Don't mourn because Im gone
Please, follow.
Tomorrow will be easier to see
If you travel the road with me.

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change?" -Dishwalla-

[This message has been edited by WinterWren (01-11-2003 09:38 PM).]

Star T
Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 182
Philadelphia, US

1 posted 2003-01-11 10:31 PM

hey winterwren.that was beautiful.and i mean that.B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L.I loved it.most likely so becos i related to it very much and i WILL follow u to tomorrow.i've also waited long enough in yesterday.its time to move on...without reverse to face a world of unknown but with high hopes.all we have to do is Put God first and he'll lead us to a perfect "tomorrow". peace...
**Only the wise can dance to the melody of life"

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

2 posted 2003-01-20 09:55 PM

Thank you so much for your comment Star T, it is greatly appreciated! Tomorrow is an unknown world.

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change?" -Dishwalla-

WindSong
Member

since 2002-12-23

Posts 313
Long Island, New York

3 posted 2003-01-27 09:05 AM

Don't know why I missed this one...I try to keep up but you're just to fast at times! As per usual, greatly written it's good that you let go of yesterday and move on to tomorrow but don't forget about the present. "Today is yesterday's tomorrow." Steph, you have great talent in all your writes I wish I could just see a lot more. Ttys. Bye!

I lie all the time - infact Im lieing right now!
Today was tomorrow yesterday.

barbaraj
Member

since 2003-01-24

Posts 139
Nova Scotia, Canada

4 posted 2003-01-27 09:52 AM

great poem. loved it. although, i'm not quite sure why..it just spoke to me i guess.

A Person Who Asks A Question Is A Fool For Five Minutes, A Person Who Doesn't Is A Fool Forever ...

XxGrAcIexX
New Member

since 2003-01-27

Posts 3
PA

5 posted 2003-01-27 05:35 PM

Excellent Poem, i liked alot.

*Belabebeautiful*

Senior Member

since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

6 posted 2003-01-27 05:56 PM

I think that this poem is one of my favorites. It is a great message about hope and I will most definitly follow you to tomorrow, well done!

People always ask me why I don't look toward my future I tell them to many interesting things are happening today.
~Bella~

*Belabebeautiful*

Senior Member

since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

7 posted 2003-01-27 05:56 PM

I think that this poem is one of my favorites. It is a great message about hope and I will most definitly follow you to tomorrow, well done!

People always ask me why I don't look toward my future I tell them to many interesting things are happening today.
~Bella~

Smoothy
Member

since 2002-12-02

Posts 119
The dark side of the moon

8 posted 2003-02-10 04:03 AM

I'm back. Sorry I was gone for awhile, but apparently your work didn't lapse in my absence. A thousand kudos to you my fellow romantic.

Love conquers all, so I must be in a losing battle.

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

9 posted 2003-02-10 01:58 PM

Hey hun

I enjoyed this lots...Living in the past is often hard and usually not the best way to go about life. Look onto tomorrow with eagerness and with an open mind. Hopefully wonderful things will come your way

Standing on the edge of the world
Now I don’t want you to catch me
I want you to let me
Stand up here and walk on my own

NeverSayDie
Junior Member

since 2001-01-18

Posts 39
Duluth, MN & Grand Forks ND

10 posted 2003-02-10 02:12 PM

That touched me, It really hit me. It helped me clarify things in my life more than ill probably know. Thanks

that poem was awsome. Thanks Thanks Thanks

chasing rain
Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 737
Canada

11 posted 2003-02-11 06:41 PM

WinterWren:

Enjoyed this one from you!

Loved the reminiscing yet wistful tone.
First line, second stanza and the last two lines of the last stanza were my favorite.

Keep up the good work!

Leah

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

12 posted 2003-02-11 07:58 PM

Smoothy: Glad you're back around, and thanks for the kudos lol.
ShUgar: Im glad you enjoyed it, wonderful things right back at you.

NeverSayDie: It is such a wonderful thing to know that my poem has helped you, instead of just being something nice to read. You have no idea how happy that makes me! I will forever appreciate your words.
Chasing rain: So glad you liked it, Thank you for taking the time to read it!

WinterWren
"Even a fool knows that we cannot touch the stars, but that doesn't keep the wise from trying."

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