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Heart Eclipsed
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Heart Eclipsed |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA 
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Guess when I wrote this? Nope, not history. I math! That's new, eh? This is kinda different for me, but let me know what you think about it.  HEART ECLIPSED Life becomes a mess A compilation of mistakes The darkness overcomes the light Heart becomes eclipsed Through the confusion that surrounds What you want and what you need Merge into one, yet are different Now you need what you don't And what you want Simply isn't there Dig in deep Die if need be Fight for your life Show the world who you are But first you must discover You for yourself Your heart is a knife Killing all who come near You have become a hostage Of yourself... But fight! Break through your heart's confines It will heal It's broken many times You won't mind You don't know what you need Your heart? It means nothing to you now. - Cody - Note To Self: If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!! If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid? [This message has been edited by CwboyAtHeart (02-07-2003 06:38 PM).] |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
I like it, pretty good for writing it in math class, I can't write at all when other ppl. are around, you are truely talented. lol. um..its good, but the ending is kinda blah. Other then that good work. ~Lexy  |
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barbaraj Member
since 2003-01-24
Posts 139Nova Scotia, Canada |
i liked this poem, but i agree that the ending was a bit weak. otherwise, it was great! ~You can make more friends in two months by becoming interested in people, than you can in two years by trying to get people interested in you.~ |
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