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Teen Poetry #6

Dirty little angel

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

0 posted 2003-02-07 07:13 PM

Eat away at me,
when you look at me.
Your eyes devour me.
Hide away from me.
But still I see,
crystal clear are your intentions.
Your dirty little smile.
I know your motivations.
When you say my name.
When you look this way.
You ust rub it in..
Spit it in my face.
Shove my mouth into the mud,
so that every word I say
matches the filth that you've become.
I'm right. No need for legthy apoligies.
Just use the soap I bought for you.
Wash us both clean.
Tainted conscience,
stiffled brightness.
Get down in the dirt and beg for forgiveness.
Clean; you could have been an angel.
But you've choosen to be soiled.
Despite this rain pouring down on you.
These tears mixed with blood.
I wait for you, I pray for you.
My dirty little angel.

Pollita
Member

since 2002-07-25

Posts 220
the unknown realm of insanity

1 posted 2003-02-07 07:30 PM

This Poem Was good.
I Liked It. *Smiles*
Keep up the good job!

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2003-02-08 11:09 AM

"Clean; you could have been an angel.
But you've choosen to be soiled.
Despite this rain pouring down on you.
These tears mixed with blood.
I wait for you, I pray for you.
My dirty little angel."

I liked the ending, it helps to pull your thoughts together...very good!

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