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Fariegirl
Member

since 2003-02-05

Posts 147

0 posted 2003-02-07 11:59 AM

you will not know beautiful,
just by looking at someone,
you will not know beautiful,
just by looking at a magazine cover,
you will know beautiful,
just by getting to know someone.

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

1 posted 2003-02-07 06:44 PM

the length of this had no effect on the actual poem, this was awesome. thanks for sharing.

If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain.

barbaraj
Member

since 2003-01-24

Posts 139
Nova Scotia, Canada

2 posted 2003-02-08 12:30 PM

great poem.

~You can make more friends in two months by becoming interested in people, than you can in two years by trying to get people interested in you.~

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

3 posted 2003-02-08 05:34 PM

hey, this was good....i loved the simplicity of it....

Ri

Morning mist clings to my face, and my soul opens up to you......

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

4 posted 2003-02-08 06:18 PM

A wonderfully simple poem that is an enjoyable read, thanks for sharing

Jaime

Registered

Member
Posts 250

5 posted 2003-02-09 10:01 AM

Ditto to what all those other people said...

Simple. Short. Meaningful. True.

Nice job.

- Jaime

the faeries creep into my hair at night leaving it in terrible knots

Chloey
Member

since 2002-09-29

Posts 74
in a silver mustang convertible

6 posted 2003-02-24 09:13 PM

Hey gurl! Nice Job! Haven't heard any of ur poems at school! Really tru!

$*$Chloey$*$

If you don't like the way I am.....screw you!

gummidemilo
New Member

since 2003-02-25

Posts 9

7 posted 2003-02-25 12:58 PM

Well, since I kinda think people post here to receive some actual response and perhaps insight and not just blind congratulations, I'll say that I thought that poem was trite and shallow. Some poems are beautiful in their simplicity, some are just simple.

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

8 posted 2003-02-27 05:57 PM

Simple and true. How can so many people not understand that?

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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