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Eminem wanna be
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since 2003-02-04
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Windsor, Missouri

0 posted 2003-02-26 07:31 PM


Brandon you can't do this to me
God can you hear this plea?
Brandon I can't do this all over baby
and I know it ain't a maybe

I know I can't make it through
without fallen in love again with you
Baby for the best...LEAVE this place
now I gotta hide my face

cause when I see you I blush
talkin in head-->YOU KNOW YOU LOV....HUSH!!!
I can't love him again...he's got a girl
OH MY GOD MY HEADS STARTIN TO TWIRL!!!!

what do I do, where do I go?
AHHHHHH I DON'T KNOW!!
Brandon was the only person I could talk to
now what do I do????!!!!




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PrOpErTyOfSeAn381
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1 posted 2003-02-27 06:31 PM


This poem is very good.... next poem try not to talk about ur boy tho! good poem tho!

Eminem wanna be
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2 posted 2003-02-27 07:21 PM


sorry but uh this is what im goin through and it makes me want to write to let  out the feelings
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