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~DreamChild~
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in your dreams

0 posted 2003-02-05 02:06 AM


A sad day was yesterday
it seems we all
have lost our way
have wandered off
and left the path
but today is here
we cant look back


A sad day it is today
weve failed to show
our kids the way
now they're lost
just like we were
tomorrow seems
even more unsure

A sad day will be tomorrow
still we sit
and count our sorrows
day by day
and year by year
looking forward
to tomorrows tears


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with you
1 posted 2003-02-06 12:05 PM


how very sad this is...
even one positive change can make a difference.

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2 posted 2003-02-06 05:28 PM




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3 posted 2003-02-07 06:42 PM


jeesh. i really liked this. this was totally awesome, sad, but awesome. thanks for sharing.

If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain.

barbaraj
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4 posted 2003-02-08 12:32 PM


this was wonderful. sad but wonderful.

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