Teen Poetry #6 |
Morning Sky |
WindSong Member
since 2002-12-23
Posts 313Long Island, New York |
Hey everyone! Sorry...I've been busy with school and haven't had the time to be here to read some great poetry...So...in the mean time I wrote a poem during one of my boring classes...Here is "Morning Sky" inspirated by the bus ride the other day... The long ride to school gives me a chance to see you rise. The bright colors of pink red yellow flutter on the East side. Illuminating my world. Looking out over the field of life, you rise minute by minute. The days you aren't there, are the days I don't shine. I wake up every morning just to see your wild rainbow of colors stream across the sky. Everyday a different pattern. Everyday a new color. You surround me with warmth. Lately, it's been the opposite but I still watch you rise. ...Well...I'm back for now...lol...See ya! Hope you liked! I lie all the time - infact Im lieing right now! Today is yesterdays tomorrow. [This message has been edited by WindSong (02-04-2003 10:17 PM).] |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Again, your beautiful imagery pulled me right in. I'm becoming a big fan of your work Keep it up Monkey!! |
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barbaraj Member
since 2003-01-24
Posts 139Nova Scotia, Canada |
great poem. keep it up. ~You can make more friends in two months by becoming interested in people, than you can in two years by trying to get people interested in you.~ |
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