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WindSong
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since 2002-12-23
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Long Island, New York

0 posted 2003-02-03 07:40 PM


Hey everyone! Sorry...I've been busy with school and haven't had the time to be here to read some great poetry...So...in the mean time I wrote a poem during one of my boring classes...Here is "Morning Sky" inspirated by the bus ride the other day...

The long ride to school
gives me a chance to see you rise.
The bright colors of pink red yellow
flutter on the East side.
Illuminating my world.
Looking out over the
field of life, you rise minute by minute.
The days you aren't there,
are the days I don't shine.
I wake up every morning just
to see your wild rainbow
of colors stream across the sky.
Everyday a different pattern.
Everyday a new color.
You surround me with warmth.
Lately, it's been the opposite
but I still watch you rise.


...Well...I'm back for now...lol...See ya! Hope you liked!


I lie all the time - infact Im lieing right now!
Today is yesterdays tomorrow.

[This message has been edited by WindSong (02-04-2003 10:17 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-02-04 06:51 PM


Again, your beautiful imagery pulled me right in. I'm becoming a big fan of your work Keep it up

Monkey!!

barbaraj
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since 2003-01-24
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2 posted 2003-02-08 09:14 PM


great poem. keep it up.

~You can make more friends in two months by becoming interested in people, than you can in two years by trying to get people interested in you.~


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