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Kielo
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0 posted 2003-02-03 12:26 PM


The depths of my despair fade to black.
I picture you, in dark blue shroud –
the mists settle around your feet;
I watch them ebb and swell with your smile.

The moon in the distance
lends a ghostly pallor to your face.
Your raven black hair trails down your shoulders
and your lifeless grey eyes stare into mine.

I remember when they burned with that iridescent fire –
when they were aflame with your passion.
Your untamed heart was mine
you handed it to me, whole in all its beauty...

I tore it apart, and now we are here –
here where the depths of my despair fade to black.


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What can I say? We enjoyed the last one so much we decided to write another one.

I know only one thing, and that thing is that I know nothing.

[This message has been edited by Kielo (02-03-2003 02:10 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-02-03 12:50 PM


Bravo.

~Titus

Es ist gut, daß das Leben die Toten studieren sollte.

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2 posted 2003-02-03 01:38 AM


Heey, we're good

Monkey!!

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3 posted 2003-02-03 06:19 AM


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"Opinion is nothing more than ones point of view."

Larry C
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4 posted 2003-02-03 09:39 AM


So where "all the kings horses and all the kings men" that are gonna put this back together again. Written well, by two of my favorite people! Cool.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Kielo
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5 posted 2003-02-03 01:18 PM


Skyfire... I forgot the title... Are you on Yahoo?

Kielo

I know only one thing, and that thing is that I know nothing.

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6 posted 2003-02-03 06:06 PM


It has a title!

Yes, I can be a...

~Titus

Es ist gut, daß das Leben die Toten studieren sollte.

Kielo
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7 posted 2003-02-03 06:43 PM


We think you're beautiful Titus.

Kielo

I know only one thing, and that thing is that I know nothing.

barbaraj
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8 posted 2003-02-08 09:12 PM


great poem

~You can make more friends in two months by becoming interested in people, than you can in two years by trying to get people interested in you.~


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