Teen Poetry #6 |
Moonlight Reflections (collab with Skyfire) |
Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
The depths of my despair fade to black. I picture you, in dark blue shroud – the mists settle around your feet; I watch them ebb and swell with your smile. The moon in the distance lends a ghostly pallor to your face. Your raven black hair trails down your shoulders and your lifeless grey eyes stare into mine. I remember when they burned with that iridescent fire – when they were aflame with your passion. Your untamed heart was mine you handed it to me, whole in all its beauty... I tore it apart, and now we are here – here where the depths of my despair fade to black. . What can I say? We enjoyed the last one so much we decided to write another one. I know only one thing, and that thing is that I know nothing. [This message has been edited by Kielo (02-03-2003 02:10 PM).] |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Bravo. ~Titus Es ist gut, daß das Leben die Toten studieren sollte. |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Heey, we're good Monkey!! |
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ZetaCel Junior Member
since 2003-01-30
Posts 18 |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
So where "all the kings horses and all the kings men" that are gonna put this back together again. Written well, by two of my favorite people! Cool. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
Skyfire... I forgot the title... Are you on Yahoo? Kielo I know only one thing, and that thing is that I know nothing. |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
It has a title! Yes, I can be a... ~Titus Es ist gut, daß das Leben die Toten studieren sollte. |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
We think you're beautiful Titus. Kielo I know only one thing, and that thing is that I know nothing. |
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barbaraj Member
since 2003-01-24
Posts 139Nova Scotia, Canada |
great poem ~You can make more friends in two months by becoming interested in people, than you can in two years by trying to get people interested in you.~ |
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