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P.R.C
Junior Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 40
Hull, England

0 posted 2003-02-01 06:28 PM

He is the one,
With only the sweetest things to say
He is the one,
That brightens my everyday

He is the one,
For whom I feel so strong
He is the one,
That does no wrong

He is the one,
That makes me smile
He is the one,
That I love, there’s no denial

He is the one,
That is so honest
He is the one,
That is the best

He is the one,
I shall love forever
He is the one,
That I shall tell this to never

ZetaCel
Junior Member

since 2003-01-30

Posts 18

1 posted 2003-02-01 07:08 PM

He is the one
Who is lucky to have you
He is the one
Who should give you a cookie too!

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"Opinion is nothing more than ones point of view."

P.R.C
Junior Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 40
Hull, England

2 posted 2003-02-02 08:06 AM

He is the one
That doesnt know
He is the one
Who I will never show

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

3 posted 2003-03-04 07:21 PM

Hannah~
I very much enjoyed the rhythm and flow of this piece.
You've penned your sentiments very well.
Nicely done.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2003-03-04 08:01 PM

If he's the one.....just do it already

Grab those legs of yours, open your mouth and speak those special words.
You don't want to regret not ever trying.

Great poem.

-j-

Look at the sun and burn your eyes. You'll be fine in the end.

frolicking dolphin
Member

since 2003-02-23

Posts 268
my own special world

5 posted 2003-03-04 08:39 PM

Nice poem, unfortunately I'm in the same predicament as you and will never tell my crush my true feelings, no matter how strong my love grows for him.

~*~Karen~*~

~Dream like you'll live forever,live like you'll die tomorrow~

Albino_Jenn
Member

since 2003-03-03

Posts 105
Ontario, Canada

6 posted 2003-03-04 11:08 PM

To all you who doubt..trust me..it's worth it to say something because when I said something I found out that he liked me too, and even if he doesn't feel that way, if he is the good person you make him out to be, he will be flatered you feel that way!And will maybe realize he feels the same in time!

Jenn

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