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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
It's been a while! Yet another sappy love poem..I'm getting pretty good at these! Love's a funny thing you know? I can make it work out for everyone else but when It comes to me it's like I forget everything, even common sense, but such is love, right? Anyways comments are always appreciated! I love you more than life itself But I'm afraid to love. My heart is like the fragile wings Of a tiny little dove. I'm scared to get too close I feel that i can't win You'll love me for a little while Then you'll set me free again I've lived so long on hopes and dreams I dont know what to do I dont think i can trust my heart, For it belongs to you I know you'll only hurt me Yet, I still keep running back Between the paths of our hearts There's a worn and beaten track You’ve got my heart held on a string It’s breaking right in two Enough belongs to me to hurt, The rest belongs to you I know that somewhere in your heart There is a place for me I just dont know how to find it And theres no way to make you see I can only hope that someday You’ll wake up and you’ll find, That while my heart belongs to you, Yours to belongs to mine People always ask me why I don't look toward my future I tell them to many interesting things are happening today. ~Bella~ [This message has been edited by *Belabebeautiful* (03-04-2003 04:29 PM).] |
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PoeTik JusTice Member
since 2003-01-05
Posts 186California, USA |
It was very good! I always enjoy your writing. Don't we all forget common sense when it comes to love? hehe. XoXo Love Alwayz XoXo |
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frolicking dolphin Member
since 2003-02-23
Posts 268my own special world |
That's just about how I feel now and have felt many times in the past, but somehow it seems all of my crushes drift away. Nice Poem! ~*~Karen~*~ |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
Hey! Thanks for the comments! I tried to edit the message but my computer is being beastly and won't let me..Anyways The first stanza above the message I wrote is suppose to be below the message with the rest of the poem. Sorry for the mix up, glad you like it! ~Live and Laugh~ People always ask me why I don't look toward my future I tell them to many interesting things are happening today. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Love....it's an interesting thing. I'm not sure if love is the right word though. If individuals love one moment, and then completely leave/ditch/change their minds...well it doesn't sound like that amazing feeling. I'd love to talk about love right now, but I'm not sure if the "advice" would be well taken hehe  good poem though. I did enjoy this very much. I wish you the best of luck.  -j- Look at the sun and burn your eyes. You'll be fine in the end. |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
I finally managed to edit this thing right! Yay! Thank you guys for the comments, Dopey Dope~ I would love to get into a disscusion with you about it sometime! As for the poem it's a typical senerio, I'm in love with my best friend and he has feelings for me but everytime he starts to reach out for me something always pulls him back and I think that he is a little bit afraid that if he commits and something happens that we will lose what we have know, I just wish I could show him that it wouldn't be like that!! Well anyways..thanks again for the replys Adios! ~Live and Laugh~ People always ask me why I don't look toward my future I tell them to many interesting things are happening today. |
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