Teen Poetry #6 |
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*Belabebeautiful*![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
It's been a while! Yet another sappy love poem..I'm getting pretty good at these! Love's a funny thing you know? I can make it work out for everyone else but when It comes to me it's like I forget everything, even common sense, but such is love, right? Anyways comments are always appreciated! I love you more than life itself But I'm afraid to love. My heart is like the fragile wings Of a tiny little dove. I'm scared to get too close I feel that i can't win You'll love me for a little while Then you'll set me free again I've lived so long on hopes and dreams I dont know what to do I dont think i can trust my heart, For it belongs to you I know you'll only hurt me Yet, I still keep running back Between the paths of our hearts There's a worn and beaten track You’ve got my heart held on a string It’s breaking right in two Enough belongs to me to hurt, The rest belongs to you I know that somewhere in your heart There is a place for me I just dont know how to find it And theres no way to make you see I can only hope that someday You’ll wake up and you’ll find, That while my heart belongs to you, Yours to belongs to mine People always ask me why I don't look toward my future I tell them to many interesting things are happening today. ~Bella~ [This message has been edited by *Belabebeautiful* (03-04-2003 04:29 PM).] |
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PoeTik JusTice Member
since 2003-01-05
Posts 186California, USA |
It was very good! I always enjoy your writing. Don't we all forget common sense when it comes to love? hehe. XoXo Love Alwayz XoXo |
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frolicking dolphin Member
since 2003-02-23
Posts 268my own special world |
That's just about how I feel now and have felt many times in the past, but somehow it seems all of my crushes drift away. Nice Poem! ~*~Karen~*~ |
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*Belabebeautiful*![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
Hey! Thanks for the comments! I tried to edit the message but my computer is being beastly and won't let me..Anyways The first stanza above the message I wrote is suppose to be below the message with the rest of the poem. Sorry for the mix up, glad you like it! ~Live and Laugh~ People always ask me why I don't look toward my future I tell them to many interesting things are happening today. |
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Dopey Dope![]()
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Love....it's an interesting thing. I'm not sure if love is the right word though. If individuals love one moment, and then completely leave/ditch/change their minds...well it doesn't sound like that amazing feeling. I'd love to talk about love right now, but I'm not sure if the "advice" would be well taken hehe ![]() good poem though. I did enjoy this very much. I wish you the best of luck. ![]() -j- Look at the sun and burn your eyes. You'll be fine in the end. |
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*Belabebeautiful*![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
I finally managed to edit this thing right! Yay! Thank you guys for the comments, Dopey Dope~ I would love to get into a disscusion with you about it sometime! As for the poem it's a typical senerio, I'm in love with my best friend and he has feelings for me but everytime he starts to reach out for me something always pulls him back and I think that he is a little bit afraid that if he commits and something happens that we will lose what we have know, I just wish I could show him that it wouldn't be like that!! Well anyways..thanks again for the replys Adios! ~Live and Laugh~ People always ask me why I don't look toward my future I tell them to many interesting things are happening today. |
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