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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
 The person this is for knows who they are. Of course, you don't have to be all that intelligent to figure out who it is, I guess... *shrug*You are my shining star because I don't live in the daytime. You guide me through the dark, leading me by your light. You are the star I wish upon, and you are the unmoving foundation where I rest my faith. The heavens were never so beautiful until you appeared in them. I love you! Kielo I know only one thing, and that thing is that I know nothing. |
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NSnaomian Member
since 2002-07-22
Posts 232In my troll closet I be |
Awww, thats cute. Well done. Laura "All that I desire to point out is the general principle that Life imitates Art far more than Art imitates Life." |
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PoetryIsLife 
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Quite cute, and sweet, Kielo.  You did good.  It seemed a bit short... it almost felt like, even if this isn't true, that it came together quickly. That doesn't have to be a good or bad thing. I was just left feeling like we were only given the tip of the iceberg, you know? ~Titus  "On the plains of Hesitation lie the blackend bones of countless millions, who, at the verge of victory, sat down to wait, and waiting - died." |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Well of course it was only the tip of the iceberg; it was about me  I do hope I'm right lolKielo I miss you!!!! Come back to me!!!! *smooches* Sometimes you find a friend where once there wasn't one. Sometimes you find a love where once there was a friend. |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
Yah, m'dear, its about you. And yes, its only the tip of the iceberg, but I don't want to expose all my dark secrets  So  to you.I love you muchlys Rhonda... Kielo I know only one thing, and that thing is that I know nothing. |
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