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Heal My Wounds (I'm Hurting)
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Heal My Wounds (I'm Hurting) |
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Susie Junior Member
since 2002-12-19
Posts 36Illinois |
Heal my wounds, I'm hurting, Don't yell. Heal my wounds, I'm hurting, Don't tell. Heal my wounds, I'm hurting, Don't let me hurt more. Heal my wounds, I'm hurting, Even worse than before. Heal my wounds, I'm hurting, Please let me breathe. Heal my wounds, I'm hurting, Take away sharp objects please. Heal my wounds, I'm hurting, Don't let me try by myself. Heal my wounds, I'm hurting, Don't let me-please help! |
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wvplayernotreally Member
since 2002-11-06
Posts 215yakima wa |
wow i hope these aren't your true feelings...this was good though. keep it up "Heal my wounds, I'm hurting, Don't tell." " I think I got a tan from the light in which i was basking." |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
I liked this one, it talks about what we all have to do at one point in our lives. A plea for help and yet being ashamed to have to ask for it. Well written I enjoyed it! People always ask me why I don't look toward my future I tell them to many interesting things are happening today. |
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