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Teen Poetry #6

Somethings changed

NeverSayDie
Junior Member

since 2001-01-18

Posts 39
Duluth, MN & Grand Forks ND

0 posted 2003-01-29 09:40 PM

My heart feels the pain
but my mind has changed

I say I don't love you
but my heart doesn't agree

I feel for you
and wish i could change that

But deep down I'll love you
and would like you to know

I'm always there for you
where ever your heart may let you go

It may pain you
but it pains me too

Because the love I had
is something I just can't let go

It was the happiness in my life
the silver lining of the rain cloud

It made me apprecitate things
and lay off the gin

But now is sit here missing you
hoping things may change someday

But deep down I hope they never do

Because deep down I will always love you

AJMGW
Member

since 2002-11-19

Posts 57
Galaxy Roller Rink

1 posted 2003-01-30 12:30 PM

WOW!!!!!!!! I read that and I could conect it to things I've written about. But you got it out so much better than I could of!!! I love it!!!!!!!!!

AJMGW

Victoria7
Junior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 21

2 posted 2003-01-30 03:50 PM

your poem was really well worded. i liked it b/c i can relate to that feeling.

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