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Teen Poetry #6

Ice-Cold Ground

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2003-07-06 11:45 PM

I don’t like this pain anymore…
I don’t like this pain anymore…

I plead for comfort,
So I can rest at ease…
Before this pain finally,
Brings me to my knees…

And an old-wound reopened…
And an old-wound reopened…

You got so close,
I just want to know,
Why is the pain still fresh,
If it happened so long ago?....

~*I know this is short..but..I got this far, I'll prolly add on to it later..its to late right now and I'm tired LoL.*~

If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain.

[This message has been edited by Spine Grinder (07-06-2003 11:46 PM).]

Kandi
Member

since 2000-06-14

Posts 354
North of Hell

1 posted 2003-07-07 01:10 AM

I enjoyed this one, even if it is short. You don't NEED to add to it, but if you decide to, I think you have a pretty great beginning. Will check back to see what you do with this.
~Kay

Just wanna be funny,looks like the joke's on me.
So call me Captain Backfire.

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