Teen Poetry #6 |
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Never say I didn't warn you |
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infinite disaster Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 69Illinois |
Hold my gun to your head Pull the trigger And never say I didn’t warn you I beg of you The pain will quickly fade You won’t feel a thing Close your eyes And never say I didn’t warn you These words will never be spoken again This pain will never again be released You said I had no reason to be alive Now I do You screamed for help That will be the last time you will ever scream I didn’t stop you I wanted you to scream To somehow feel the pain I feel Shut up The tint of the tape that covers your mouth Reflects off the wall and into my eyes Times of us flash into mind Stab the mind These wounds can never be healed But never say I didn’t warn you The blood splatters And onto my white shirt The metallic taste reaches my tongue I look into your cold eyes How could you do this to me With one last look I put my gun to my head But never say I didn’t warn you. Okay, Ihaven't written in a very long time, writer's block sucks. anyways, this is really really dark. but i was listening to a song and these words just came to me. I am proof that the heart is a risky fuel to burn. |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
what love can do, right? nice work i thought. |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
ahh...good. So..real I felt like a was witnessing it all. It is dark, but oh so well written. ~Lex |
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Kandi Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 354North of Hell |
Your critique says to be honest so I'll admit I was caught off guard by this one and at first maybe even a little uncomfortable.....but then I read it again and wow....loved it. Amazing piece of work. So honest and detailed. Great work. ~Kay Just wanna be funny,looks like the joke's on me. |
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