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anawnda Member
since 2002-07-26
Posts 113
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If I could tear out these chains that bind me. then I wont be here again, Broken-winged and confused. If I could break this cycle; avoid the all-consuming flame. It wont be you the next time. but it would still be the same. same story, different face. same heart, fresh pain... *** here i go again, another sad love story,i love you...... why do you love her???????? * you can hurt me...with your bare hands,or you can hurt me using the sharp edge of what you said.....* jewel kilcher [This message has been edited by anawnda (09-30-2002 04:13 AM).] |
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anawnda Member
since 2002-07-26
Posts 113 |
ey, I havent posted for a long time. I back!!!! anyway a lot has happened already. why am i so stupid????? i just plunge back into the same thing over and over and i never learn. this is totally unrelate4d but i almost got jailed. well im a minor but there's this fire alarm scandal thingy.... hands off on fire alarms people!!!!! |
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quietlydying
since 2001-06-10
Posts 935the wonderful land of oz |
i really like the emotion in this piece. very strong. maybe you should proofread before posting. just a thought. /jen/ so foul and fair a day i have not seen. - macbeth act 1, scene 3 |
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anawnda Member
since 2002-07-26
Posts 113 |
I cant seem to edit it already!!!! I just wrote it imprompu and I could see my errors in it now. Unrequited Love (9/29/02) If I could tear out these chains That bind me. Then I wont be here again, Broken winged and confused. If I could break this cycle; Avoid the all-consuming flame. It wont be you the next time. But it would still be the same. Same story, Different face. Same heart, Fresh pain......... *** |
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