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Deep_Inside Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 377i can't stop hiding |
lyeing here in my room waiting for empending doom sitting across a desert waist my mind becomes a milky past i man not think so i just let it be with her eyes staring back at me when i'm alone my hole wrips in to begging for the one who thought you so true adrellin rush sharting with fear welling for the _ _ _ _! so vary near things are starting to make sense don't know what it is but it's intense two different sides i do see but like a moriior back at me i burnt myself to be set free but i found thats no longer me it was there at the start but now it's from the heart and for all the time we where gone we where never really apart |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
nice...eor |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Nice work. I like the ending of this poem, but what is the _ _ _ _? Please tell.  Oh, and I love your critique message!  Parasite Learn to place poetry before people |
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