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Chel2082 Junior Member
since 2002-07-23
Posts 40Baltimore, MD |
Why can't you tell the truth? I give you so many chances and all you do is lie You talk to other people, but not me, your best friend Why can't you tell the truth? I found out the truth from other people And all you can do is say you are sorry Why can't you just tell the truth? The worst thing in the world is for you to lie then tell the truth after someone else tells the truth for you. Why can't you just tell the truth? With GOD all things are possible, true friends stab you in the front...~*CHEL*~ |
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NSnaomian Member
since 2002-07-22
Posts 232In my troll closet I be |
Hmm, I know what you are saying but it is just a bunch of thoughts and doesn't seem as well organized as it could be. Maybe try and cut some words out of repeating lines so it doesn't repeat...Good though, you're getting there. Laura "All that I desire to point out is the general principle that Life imitates Art far more than Art imitates Life." |
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