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Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

0 posted 2002-09-12 04:08 PM

Drained

At the end of the day
as raindrops of misery reign
it’s not your makeup that fades
just the illusion of happiness
that has slowly d
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                 e
                 d

and time leaves it’s mark
as the mist starts to SWELL
covering the dark rings
the scars of no sleep
the ugliness of another dawn

Andrew

"I still feel the pain in my heart, what once was pure is now diluted" - Biffy Cylro

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

1 posted 2002-09-12 09:11 PM

This is better! This is more like what I'm used to reading from you. My ego wants me to think this is about me, but it's all good. Don't stop writing, kay? Even if you hate the world, don't ever stop writing.

I don't drink. I end up making out with random guys. *thinks* Okay, random guys AND random girls. That is why I don't drink.

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

2 posted 2002-09-13 04:48 AM

*smiles at Rhonda's ego*

Andrew~
This really is well written and well expressed.
I definately have to echo Rhonda.
Don't ever stop writing.
I always enjoy reading you.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes
[This message has been edited by vlraynes (09-13-2002 04:49 AM).]

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...