Teen Poetry #6 |
tears |
devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
tears dripping down to the floor splash on the tile tears pure and clear the cause so dirty evil cruel and rude tears lies deciet and pain cause tears many tears have i cried enough to flood the earth tears i only wish these tears would dry away i wish that u would wipe them away insted of making them flow tears |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
I like the ideas you have expressed here about tears, that we can find them in happiness and sorrow, in pain and in love. Thank you for sharing this with us I really enjoyed the read Andrew If your reading this signature I have replied to your poem, please repay the compliment :) |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
Andrew.. like Andy.. like--- Ah, sorry, Allison, I'm spacin out. Mike... It's so sad, man. Things will get better, the pain goes away. (as SGT. Whateverhernameis said) Hm... I wish I could give you some type of encouragement, but I can't find any words. Andy has a g/f too, and if i ever asked him out, he'd say no. Look at it this why... you look 10 times better than a lot of the people at our school. (including myself) And why Mike turned you down for that stupid...whateverhernameis chick(no relation to SGT. whateverhernameis).. I don't know, but I do know.. he should've been with you. Don't let him put you down.. even though he seems like he could've been the best, I know there's somone better for you- somewhere. You just gotta find him. Best of luck (GREAT POEM...nice to hear you're getting you're emotions out) ~Sara ps..there's always Mr. Shinoda. Life of a simple man, taught that everyone else is dirty, and thier love is meaningless... oh, i'm so soiled. (mudvayne) [This message has been edited by PoeticGoddessOfDepression (09-28-2002 02:09 PM).] |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
sara u r really crackin me up. but u almost made me cry to. that is sucha a nice thing to say. it was such a kind gesture. i really appreciate it. |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
Well you know..... [This message has been edited by PoeticGoddessOfDepression (09-28-2002 02:07 PM).] |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
I try my best. Along the way to scarring your ego, |
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