Ì'll Be Singing This Song

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Teen Poetry #6

Ì'll Be Singing This Song

Hallucination
Member

since 2001-03-18

Posts 419

0 posted 2002-09-27 05:10 AM

Hi folks,
I just wrote this one, just felt like getting something like this out. a little fun never hurts no one...I don't!
Please critique, thanks!
Best Wishes,

Brian.

"I'll Be Singing This Song"
(09/27/02)
© 2002 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved

I'll be singing this song while in the shower
In a bottle of shampoo,
When I'm squeezing my towell with so much power
Althought I'll look like a fool,
I'll be singing this song....

I'll be singing this song when I get married
Loudly upon the alter,
As rice crawl down my pants I'll walk on bare feet
But love with no pre-corsure.
I'll be singing this song....

I'll be singing this song when I get older
In the retirement home,
When I am going senil and a bit bolder
And brush my teeth with my kome,
I'll be singing this song...

I'll be Singing this song...Forever More

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

1 posted 2002-09-27 05:06 PM

Sounds like a long song, or a really good one! What exactly ws the name of this song???
Nice job, Hallucination!!

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

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