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jeffwillett
Member

since 2003-01-04

Posts 86
Texas, US

0 posted 2003-01-09 05:59 PM

-Singing Lobster-

What If I was a big red lobster?
And I had big red claws to.
Every time that you came near me,
I would sing a song for you.

That would make me a singing lobster.
There's not too much more to say,
But do you think you would run and hide,
Or could you just be okay?

What If I was a singing lobster?
Do you think you'd be my friend?
I would not want you to run away.
I don't think my heart would mend.

If I were just a singing lobster,
I do not think I would see,
I'm no more than an ocean dweller,
What else can a lobster be?

This is the first "light-hearted" peiced i've ever written.

EleanorMoonbaby
Member

since 2002-09-02

Posts 202
England, UK

1 posted 2003-01-10 05:34 PM

I liked this. It reminded me of that singing lobster out of the Disney version of "The Little Mermaid". It was quite interesting. Nice one.
Ellie

"I'm terribly sorry ma'am, my karma just ran over your dogma"

foreverwithyou
Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 204
Wonderland

2 posted 2003-01-10 07:30 PM

this was good i liked the message in it
-CATHY

"I am who I am who I am who am I?"

jeffwillett
Member

since 2003-01-04

Posts 86
Texas, US

3 posted 2003-01-10 10:46 PM

wow, someone actually got the message!

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

4 posted 2003-01-11 09:42 PM

This one was good, it was funny and serious at the same time. I liked it. Yea! A light hearted one! I've found that when you start writing those, more of the same will come and it'll be easier to write 'em after awhile. I don't know, maybe it wasn't even hard for you.

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change?" -Dishwalla-

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

5 posted 2003-01-15 01:16 AM

Jeff~
I love this...both from a serious and a humorous perspective.
Thanks for the smile this one gave.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

6 posted 2003-01-15 01:16 AM

This... is pure genius. *smiles* I absolutely adore the way you've done this

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