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Yes I do
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Yes I do |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
Do I truley love you, you aksed me just today I thought about your question and it came out this way I love you like a bunny loves the moring dew I love you like a child loves a morning fresh and new I love you like the sunflower loves the evening sun I love you like a teenager loves to go have fun I love the way your eyes can see into my soul I love the way your smile makes me feel competley whole I love the way your hands touch me when we embrace and I love your beautiful lips and the sweetness of your taste I love you like the tree loves the falling rain I love you as if I'll lose you or never love again I love you more than reason I love you more than time I love you so much, you've even made me ryhme And so I have to say, I guess the answers true My love, my one, my only, Yes I do love you I wrote this to my boyfriend who told me today that he loved me! It doesn't make much sense but I have trouble making sense with him on my mind!! Live and laugh and make sure to always have Bella Amor (beautiful love) |
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jeffwillett Member
since 2003-01-04
Posts 86Texas, US |
nice poem, i like the analogies..i can't even spell it but y'know! |
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jeffwillett Member
since 2003-01-04
Posts 86Texas, US |
wait, that's right! |
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rxyfxy04 Member
since 2002-11-26
Posts 54lil' town in Virginia |
i really liked that.. very good expressions used.. and love is a wonderful feeling . dont let it slip away!!.. thanks for the smile |
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PoeTik JusTice Member
since 2003-01-05
Posts 186California, USA |
Like i said...there isn't a poem of yours so far that I don't like! This is so sweet!! Good work  XoXo Love Alwayz XoXo |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
An interesting style that many can't pull off very well. You wrote this week, the repetition worked for you and added to the affect of the poem. Love is an amazing thing, isn't it? Thanks for the write, I enjoyed it and good luck with your relationship. - Cody - |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
Hey thanks for your comments guys! Love is an amazing thing!! I'm so happy right now I feel as if I could burst!! But I also find it harder now to try and write what I feel cause I want it all to come out at the same time!! Anyway thanks for the replys!! Live and laugh and make sure to always have Bella Amor (beautiful love) |
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Star T Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 182Philadelphia, US |
hey girl that was really sweet and a wonderful poem at that.i oved it.i'm in a love relationship too and i know exactly what u mean in ur poem.love kinda makes us complete...pls just try to hold on to it.forgive and never stop forgiving.dont break it off cos of some silly argument over some silly thing.okay?just hold on to it.love IS all that matters after all... **Only the wise can dance to the melody of life** |
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OtherSideOfTheMirror Member
since 2002-12-19
Posts 245 |
wow reminds me of one i wrote... Love to Ten... I know how ya feel I think it's a sweet poem... IN MANY WAYS! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Bella~ I absolutely LOVE this! I got the biggest smile on my face as I read this. You've got some wonderfully beautiful lines here and your love for him shines through in each one. I'm enjoying your poetry very much and I hope to read lots more from you. ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
Another beautifully done poem! This one was very sweet, I liked it alot! Great Job! WinterWren |
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