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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA 
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I kinda started writing this because of my having mono and constantly being tired, kinda bein in a daze and not bein all there... Then I kinda added to it and made it deeper then that, I guess. Not really about me, just somethin I wrote. It's amazing what constant tiredness does, it's like I'm in "Alice In Wonderland" and I'm just waiting for the mad hatter to start singing about my unbirthday... I have read an entire chapter in my history book over and over again, but today I took a test and remembered nothing. I read like the entire book of "Count Of Monte Cristo" last week, but I remember nothing about what I read. lol Anyway, let me know what you think.  DAZE Walking through life Stuck in a daze Not sure what's Going on these days I know where I'm at But I'm not sure why Not a lot getting done When your head's in the sky Sometimes I wonder Where I'm going I just want to be back But confusion keeps growing Is this really where I'm supposed to be? This life I live Is it really me? - Cody - |
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WindSong Member
since 2002-12-23
Posts 313Long Island, New York |
I know how mono feels...I had for ten months when I was younger and that turned into Epstein bar and now I'm stuck with Chronic Fatigue Syndrome for life! It sucks don't it! Ten months is a lot for a little girl to go through, don't you think? Three weeks is nothing. But hey, you get to sleep A LOT and sleep is goooood! Sometimes I wish I could sleep 24/7 but...Back to the poem. It was great. It actually describes me in a lot of ways. Good job! ~*~Kirah~*~ *Mistakes are made, you pay for them, then you do it again.* |
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