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Teen Poetry #6

Word Search (Break And Bare)

Darkness
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since 2002-10-17

Posts 202
The place just beyond my eyes, where my spirit flies.

0 posted 2003-01-07 01:28 PM

Tiny gratuitous secrets power frantic dreams
Sweat screams worship apparatus I am no Shadow Beauty
But my friend is gorgeous
Brazen knife goddess smears blood beneath the weak
Incubate it while raw skin diamonds cry to eternity
Moon Girl with essential viciousness void of Gardens Blue
Picture me...
With the wind, sun, and sky...Manipulating self
Elaborate chanter tonguing sweet spray at torrent storms
Sugar Wax Juggernaut woman lives a thousand symphonies
Mother her and beat my mad moment to whispering death
When the red mist shines as bitter iron
Fueling music behind torment
I'll recall and please you if you want chocolate languages
Am I lazy? A headache desire like hot honey java
And espresso
Caffeine forests soon make visions together but away
Though some lather deliriously take my sacred life
Enormous sea used and slathered in summer milk
Finger fluff egg men pound some sleep into morning
Repulsively crushed me in every lighted corridor
Ache I say… And trudge through
As I break and bare you.

jeffwillett
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since 2003-01-04

Posts 86
Texas, US

1 posted 2003-01-07 06:27 PM

not bad, i like this one

Jaime

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Posts 250

2 posted 2003-01-07 08:09 PM

I love your use of language, symbolism, etc... it's this girl's wet dream.

Very good poem.

- Jaime

And she said, I thought I'd never see me again.

Darkness
Member

since 2002-10-17

Posts 202
The place just beyond my eyes, where my spirit flies.

3 posted 2003-01-07 09:36 PM

Thanks for the whole wet dream comment it made my week!

[This message has been edited by Darkness (01-07-2003 09:37 PM).]

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